Posted by Plela on February 04, 2010 at 08:48 [72.154.160.147]
In Reply to: Another short story posted by Fatboy on February 03, 2010 at 10:42
Nicely written, and clever how you combined the two stories.
Tiny quibbles: you probably meant "wasted", not "waisted", and there's a "where" that should probably have been "were".
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