Posted by Luci on January 28, 2010 at 19:25 [98.166.223.96]
In Reply to: Sammy - Part 4 posted by mjmurra on January 27, 2010 at 14:53
I think my favorite part of this was the dual masturbation scene, particularly because of the frantic pleasuring that almost literally consumed them. It translated into this searing rise to the climax that just blows the reader away. It's like they're having sex with each other, but not. Quite well done. If you could find somewhere that would publish these, I'd recommend it. Maybe a fetish mag, perhaps? Wetset might even publish the first part of your series, unless they don't take previously published material (which anything posted on the Internet technically counts as). Anywho, damn good job.