Posted by Dump Buddy on January 23, 2000 at 18:49
Shatteringly vivid portrayal of the unbelievable power of male desperation, Wet Marker ! I right there with you. "Jay's Transformation" is a masterfully composed story.
Poor Jay. Seems to me the impact that a M-desp spectacle has for the victim, the participants, and the voyeurs is directly related to the intensity of humiliation generated by the ordeal, which is determined by two basic factors.
First, the degree of elevated status or prestige (actual or faked) of the victim. Well, Jay is a nineteen-year-old football star. Enough said.
Second, the degree to which each of his tormentors (both active and passive) can enflame his blazing desperation. There are many opinions as to which profile of tormentor is most efffective in their ability to embarass and humiliate the typical healthy young male victim. These profiles include Authority Figure-Male (the driving instructor in "The Chauffeur"), Authority Figure -Female (Miss Harris in "The Chauffeur"), The Girlfriend (Debbie in "Debbie's Poor Wet Boyfriend",) Peers -Male and Female, and the thousand haunting stares of The Public / The Crowd / The Gang. Well, here we've got all these guys ganging up in Jay: the driver, the team captain, his suffering teammates, his girlfriend waiting outside the crapper, his fellow desperate pissers. The result: a mortifying accident
that's powerfully stimulating for all involved.
I really appreciate your extremely graphic images of the explosive wetting of our healthy young male trapped on a bus, with his hot soaking flood "splattering from the seat onto the coach floor", "snaking down the aisle".
Sounds like Jay is a newby to the desperation ordeal, like TeenGuy. Inexperienced, he can"t anticipate the disaster ahead. Plus, he misjudges the physically and psychologically tortured condition of his teammates, as well as misjudging the momentum of his own descent into humiliation. Jay's probably pee shy, 'cause maybe he didn't take a leak before they got on the bus because the pub shithouse was crowded and...
I want to thank all the recent contributers of these fantastic M-Desp stories. I'd like to think we're arousing the interest in this awesome scene, by revealing the overflowing potential of this under-represented discipline, accessible to posters and lurkers of all persuasions. Since I know every dude here has endured or observed M-desp scenes more than once, there should be vast untapped archives of steamy ripe experiences for all of us to share.
C'mon guys. Cut loose for us.
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